i was sooo happy n felt like my life is so "perfect"
knock knock....
i opened the door...
i opened the door...
and reuined my 'perfect' sky..... and tore into pieces
I didnt know Why it came and what happened?
Now I lay there like a dead piece of Wood.....streams of tears flowing down my face.
since that day all my calls were left ....unattended
the Msgs and Mails ...seem to be left like an Orphan in ur Inbox.
Every time phone rang...my eyes twinkled like a tiny star...n as soon as i heard a strange 'Hello' it turned into a tear and left my eye all alone as you left me widout any reason
you left me wondering that WHY n How it all began?
I read ur Mails n Msgs which takes me back to the Golden Era of my lyf.
What happened to all promises made by U?
what happend to the Boy who said 'I Love You'?
what happend to the Love u seem to hav forgotten?
and y all the promises were Broken?
what kept u so BUSY that u dont even realize u left me all alone in the middle of the road......my Body covered with Wounds ..floating in the pool of my Own Blood...
my Heart trying hard to take in some oxygen
my Pulses dropping down like the stock market Sensex.
U left me thr to Die a Painfull death...
I Passed out...
My eyes strained and struggled to open their window
It was all dark.I heard faint voices...which gradually became loud n clear...all stranger to me
I called out for u....but Again there wasnt a single REPLY.
Now my mind was struggling hard to match all the voices i cud hear....n slowly all seemed to sound familiar to me......maa....papa...di...frnds ...relatives....but nt U
everyone asking me same question >>> shikha can U see me beta?......r u alrite?
and the only 2 words came out frm me
"THANKS SAI"
Now whether I open or Close my eyes........it made me smile.....again..........as the only thing i cud see was U
I lay there smiling ........again the reason is U
8 comments:
Its really nice infact ..it also moved me a bit...
The only thing i can say after reading this..is ki...
People say everything happens for our own good but only a few have the goodness..the others are left to face the worldly gallows..
Its awsme...
I realy lyk it, actuly its similar 2 mah case..I m facin d same problem..
Oyee chutki i must say u r an awsme writer..
U express d feelin vry well.. M ur fan now, u wrok chiku...
Stay d way u r...
N dnt wrry u will get ur luvv..
Papiyan te jhapiyan..Oyee..
Ur vigu maharaj...Hehehee
Oyeee awesmn hai yaar..It rilly felt..CHEERS..
nice shikha!..uv written it well. so i am guessing this is fiction. yeah?..
at one point i could actually feel the hurt uv expressed..i think its when u said" drowning in my own blood" :)
hey shikha...
i just had to come through your blog...
its a very fine attempt but i have a small suggestion for you if you dont mind...
Your writings can improve if you pay a bit more attention on sentence framing and vocab...
"...and torn it into pieces"
this ones grammatically incorrect...
do correct it... i feel you have just started to write and will surely learn fast and do well...
wish you all the very best...
:)
ciao..
shona must say u are an awesome writter yaar
apni puri kahani chap di wo bhi itne sahi tarike se u are jenious yaar
waise yeh likh ke kitno ko rulane ka plans hain aapke fir se ..........
tc always there 4 u
these r the few poems i hav actually liked to read...u used general n simple terms to express a tough situation...great...hats off...GOD bless!
aha... competition.. :-P
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